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I was never a fond of love;
I never invited it into my bed,
nor gave it my tears.
Not that it would ask.

And yet tears I do now give,
in sacrifice.
To a man who never asked nor incited such feelings.
Feelings that crowd my mind,  

And weigh my chest down.
With uncontrolled emotions that spire into fires of passion.
Pretty words seeming so small to describe,
the obsolete moment of truth that banishes dreams for reality.

Oh how the light so gently touches you,
and that smile.
That gives me a smile of my own.
This is a tragedy of situation my friend.

Sorrow for joy;
my dear Endymion.
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It's been an emotional week and this practically flowed out the moment I opened up my note pad.
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~BelaRoseWolf Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
This poem is tragically beautiful. :) I really love the second stanza; it's really nice! Great work!
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Mood: Joy *Forgotten-Heir Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much! :) I am glad you liked it.
And thank you for the fave! :3
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~BelaRoseWolf Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :) I really did enjoy your poem!
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*Forgotten-Heir Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
That's good to hear! It means a lot to hear that!
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